Peer Feedback - Pitch

Positives	Negatives
Very detailed explanations and clear final ideas	Possibly consider what you’d do for your mast head
Creative and imaginative design for your presentation	Could think about the layout of the DPS
Good amount of detail	Could mention sub-genres you will include
Very clear amount of detail	Got a bit dizzy while watching it spin around
Good detail, very sure about the content of your magazine	Mention mast head
Very thought out pitch	Could have included images for a visual aid
Detailed audience explanation	Include masthead
Well planned outfits	Talk about the conventions you will use
Well planned and imaginative
Good costume ideas
Good layout and information
Very good costume ideas
Good detail regarding target audience
Good costume ideas used

This is the feedback which my peers gave me after watching my Pitch presentation. From here i can see what my strengths and weaknesses are when thinking about my final product. I can see clearly that my strengths are as followed: good research into target audience, good costume ideas and well thought out plans for final product. My main weakness was the fact i forgot to mention the mast head. The mast head of my magazine will be written with a font from a website called "Cool Text" and it will be called "LOUD!''; wrote in white and blue colours.